One Last Time


My thoughts were in your thoughts

at one time

Your thoughts were in my thoughts

at one time

My hungry eyes devoured you

at one time

Your longing eyes lusted for me

at one time

Our hearts beat continuously in harmony

at one time

Our lives were full of love and romance

at one time

I was such a fool, heartless and cruel

at one time

I shed tears of pain and shame

at one time

My heart craved your forgiveness

at one time

I fell to my knees and prayed

at one time

Your eyes, they smiled

one last time

Your eyes, they were sad

one last time

Our eyes, they met

one last time

There was nothing more I could say

as you turned and walked away

one last time


A fictional poem of lost love and sorrowful regret.





  13 comments for “One Last Time

  1. 01/09/2016 at 7:23 pm

    Oooh good. Very well done. Sometimes even forgiveness demands a walk-away.

    Liked by 1 person

    • 01/09/2016 at 11:16 pm

      Thank you. Yes, I agree – forgiveness can be difficult. Perhaps, walking away will help clear the mind.


  2. 01/09/2016 at 8:09 pm

    Thanks for following my blog I’ve followed back ! Happy New Year!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. 01/09/2016 at 8:10 pm

    Thanks for linking one of my posts ! too sweet !

    Liked by 1 person

  4. 01/09/2016 at 9:21 pm

    This was beautiful to read!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. 01/09/2016 at 9:22 pm

    …….. And I love the photo! Where did you find it?

    Liked by 1 person

  6. 01/10/2016 at 5:32 pm

    Fantastic poetry. So true and yet sad. The image is gorgeous as well.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. 01/17/2016 at 3:56 pm

    I read somewhere that sometimes you need to get away from the ones that are hurting you so you can let your mind rest a bit and then think again so you can clear it up… the poem is beautiful, simple * beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

    • 01/17/2016 at 4:15 pm

      Great comment and Yes, I agree with you. I am glad you enjoyed it and thank you.

      Liked by 1 person

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