The Need for Ease

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Hums of serendipity soften the fall

A snapshot of life won’t reveal it all

Souls adrift miss the beckoning call

Desperately we pretend to be believed

Feelings of desolation to be relieved

-Eugenia

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This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word relieved. Please drop by and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place

 

 

Cheers!

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15 replies

  1. I like this yet feel a certain sense of loss. I think it’s the last two lines.

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  2. I love this poem! So poignant and soulful. Thank you for linking to In other Words.

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  3. A snapshot of life won’t reveal it all. Superb!

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  4. I really like this one! Well done!

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  5. Very evocative. I used to fear being alone. I have made peace with it as I have gotten older.

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  6. Beautiful, I love the rhythm of it. 🙂

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  7. ez does
    it
    without it
    rest
    caress
    the presence
    of the invisible
    god

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