Hums of serendipity soften the fall
A snapshot of life won’t reveal it all
Souls adrift miss the beckoning call
Desperately we pretend to be believed
Feelings of desolation to be relieved
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I like this yet feel a certain sense of loss. I think it’s the last two lines.
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Thank you, Jacqueline.
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I love this poem! So poignant and soulful. Thank you for linking to In other Words.
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Thank you, Patricia.
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A snapshot of life won’t reveal it all. Superb!
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Thank you so much, Reena. I appreciate your very kind comment.
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I really like this one! Well done!
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Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Very evocative. I used to fear being alone. I have made peace with it as I have gotten older.
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Thank you for commenting.
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Beautiful, I love the rhythm of it. 🙂
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Thank you.
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ez does
it
without it
rest
caress
the presence
of the invisible
god
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