The Need for Ease

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Hums of serendipity soften the fall

A snapshot of life won’t reveal it all

Souls adrift miss the beckoning call

Desperately we pretend to be believed

Feelings of desolation to be relieved

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This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word relieved. Please drop by and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place

 

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  15 comments for “The Need for Ease

  1. 01/11/2017 at 1:23 pm

    Splendid!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. 01/12/2017 at 5:44 am

    I like this yet feel a certain sense of loss. I think it’s the last two lines.

    Liked by 2 people

  3. 01/12/2017 at 7:42 pm

    I love this poem! So poignant and soulful. Thank you for linking to In other Words.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. 01/13/2017 at 10:48 pm

    A snapshot of life won’t reveal it all. Superb!

    Liked by 1 person

    • 01/13/2017 at 10:54 pm

      Thank you so much, Reena. I appreciate your very kind comment.

      Like

  5. 01/14/2017 at 10:38 am

    I really like this one! Well done!

    Liked by 1 person

    • 01/14/2017 at 11:16 am

      Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it.

      Like

  6. 01/17/2017 at 1:37 am

    Very evocative. I used to fear being alone. I have made peace with it as I have gotten older.

    Like

  7. 01/18/2017 at 11:27 am

    Beautiful, I love the rhythm of it. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  8. 02/04/2017 at 3:17 pm

    ez does
    it
    without it
    rest
    caress
    the presence
    of the invisible
    god

    Liked by 1 person

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