One who plunders blunders

One who bumbles stumbles

Is it our fear or revulsion

Do we quiver with convulsions

Fumes of indecision festers chaos




This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word quiver. Please drop by and join the fun at patriciasplace





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  16 comments for “Chaos

  1. 01/26/2017 at 9:42 am

    Loved this little poem.. and I saw clearly a double meaning within this poem.. so relevant for today.. 🙂 loved the image chosen too Eugenia 🙂

    • 01/26/2017 at 1:58 pm

      Thank you for your kind comment, Sue.

    • 01/26/2017 at 2:41 pm

      One more line:

      Angry stares of ignorance foment tyranny.

      • 01/26/2017 at 2:44 pm

        Yes, perfect addition.

      • 01/26/2017 at 2:44 pm

        Excellent lol

  2. 01/26/2017 at 9:44 pm

    When there is chaos I quiver! You always make me think. Thanks for sharing with In Other Words.

  3. 01/27/2017 at 2:35 am

    Love it!

  4. 01/27/2017 at 11:16 am

    Why does this poem make me think of the political quagmire? I saw other messages within. I like it 🙂

  5. 01/27/2017 at 1:26 pm

    Nice one!

    • 01/27/2017 at 10:35 pm

      Thank you, Lynn.

  6. 01/28/2017 at 10:07 am

    A powerful little poem.

    • 01/28/2017 at 11:45 am

      Thank you. 💐 🌷

  7. 01/30/2017 at 10:34 pm

    Strong words matching perfectly with a strong illustration, so very well done! This was one of your very best!!

    • 01/31/2017 at 5:47 pm

      Thank you for your kind comments. Your comments are very encouraging. 💐 🌷 🌹

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