As gossips stare a colorless soul is bared
Never learned to share, never much cared
Such a pity, such a pain being so vain
Flawed behavior tarnishes transformation
Time to shelve the ego for hibernation
§
This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word vain. Please drop by and join the fun at Patricia’s Place
Eugenia
“We may struggle, but we don’t quit”
Find Heaven by slowly backing away from Hell
The musings of a struggling blogger.
For bloggers who aspire to inspire
because the story must be told
Jesus ( Yeshua) Saves!!
mobilité quotidienne, découvertes & convictions
Portable gaming on 3DS, Switch, Vita or smartphone
3 Crazy Cats, 1 Goofy Dog, and their slightly off-the-beam human mother!
Learning and teaching the art of composition.
A Journey in My World
Only you can change your life. Never underestimate your power to change yourself.
A StoRy of LiFe and MOre
My Journey to Health and Wellness
A gateway to deep insights and small aphorisms
haikai poetry matters
LONG SOUL-SEARCHING CONVERSATIONS WITH MYSELF
Mental health awareness, negative to positive perspective. ~~ Creative Writing ~~
"My pen loves gossiping to paper about my imagination's secrets."
Make PEACE ✌ Show LOVE❤
Is it destiny, happenstance or stratagem?
Sing It. Say It. Write It.
Athul Raj
by Kelly Lewis
Indie Authors Unite!
Unclogging my mind...
Reblogged this on zaynaresto.
LikeLike
This is just too beautiful, and horrendously close to reality, at the same time….
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Reena.
LikeLike
This so prompted thoughts of Carly Simons line “You’re so vain, you probably thin this song is about you …” ^^ Excellent!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Meh *thinK*
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Greg. I thought about Carley Simon’s song when I wrote the poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes I’m vain.
I look into my mirror and see me.
The way I think I am.
You look at me from the outside,
I pray to God you see my beauty shining from within.
LikeLiked by 1 person
It’s not difficult to see your beauty within, Donna-Luisa. 🌼 🌸 🌺
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great take on ‘vain’.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLike
A colorless soul…vain. As they say, (whoever they are) you hit the nail on the head. Thanks for linking to In Other Words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Patricia.
LikeLike
Really nice
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am glad you enjoyed it, Lynn.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes, I thought of Carly Simon (whom I love) when I saw Patricia’s prompt for us. This poem fits right in. Hugs.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you and sending hugs your way.
LikeLike
my soul is on ice
which can be nice
the sun will
rise
and so too will i
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice! 🙂
LikeLike
ty
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sounds rather like the psyche of reality TV stars: famous for being famous.
LikeLiked by 1 person
😃
LikeLike
I wonder why your comments went to my spam box.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I have had this happen too. Not only on WP but other emails that I regularly receive end up in spam. Oh well.
LikeLike
Please follow me 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am. 😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank u 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Spot on ,Eugenia x
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks! 🙃
LikeLiked by 1 person