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 gossips stare a witless soul is bared

never shared or even cared

such a pity being so vain

flawed behavior hard to bear

 an alter ego exclaims – beware!

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This week the event is to write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word vain. Please drop by and join the fun at Patricia’s Place

Eugenia

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36 replies

  1. Engineer IP Dev Crash Browser
    02/08/2017 • 9:08 pm

    Reblogged this on zaynaresto.

    Like

  2. Reena Saxena
    02/08/2017 • 11:00 pm

    This is just too beautiful, and horrendously close to reality, at the same time….

    Liked by 1 person

  3. gregrichardsauth
    02/09/2017 • 8:26 am

    This so prompted thoughts of Carly Simons line “You’re so vain, you probably thin this song is about you …” ^^ Excellent!

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  4. Dwordslayer
    02/09/2017 • 8:37 am

    Yes I’m vain.
    I look into my mirror and see me.
    The way I think I am.
    You look at me from the outside,
    I pray to God you see my beauty shining from within.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. that little voice
    02/09/2017 • 11:50 am

    Great take on ‘vain’.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Patricia
    02/09/2017 • 9:46 pm

    A colorless soul…vain. As they say, (whoever they are) you hit the nail on the head. Thanks for linking to In Other Words.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. McGuffy Ann
    02/10/2017 • 6:31 pm

    Yes, I thought of Carly Simon (whom I love) when I saw Patricia’s prompt for us. This poem fits right in. Hugs.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. utahan15
    02/11/2017 • 6:28 pm

    my soul is on ice
    which can be nice
    the sun will
    rise
    and so too will i

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Cara Hartley
    02/12/2017 • 3:51 am

    Sounds rather like the psyche of reality TV stars: famous for being famous.

    Liked by 1 person

  11. jacquelineobyikocha
    02/14/2017 • 8:38 am

    I wonder why your comments went to my spam box.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. fancyfaryal
    02/16/2017 • 9:30 am

    Please follow me 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  14. inhiscare753
    07/19/2019 • 10:38 am

    This is penned beautifully

    Liked by 1 person

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