Burn Out

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 Scorching words should not be heard

We got no need for evil misdeeds

Atrocities breed from things absurd

Define your soul while sewing seeds

The best foot forward is the one that leads

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This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word scorching.  Please drop by and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place

Eugenia

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  28 comments for “Burn Out

  1. 07/13/2017 at 12:41 am

    ‘Define your soul, while sewing seeds’ had me totally. Not sure if it was a typo between sowing and sewing, but it gives it a new dimension altogether. We are mentally not the product of a single seed. There is so much that goes into making us what we are. I loved it!

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    • 07/13/2017 at 10:54 am

      😃 Thank you and I am pleased that you read and analyzed my piece. I enjoy adding little twists to my poems and yes, sewing was my intention.

      Liked by 1 person

  2. 07/13/2017 at 1:36 am

    You are the wise woman from East and West 🙂
    Your poem carries lots of wisdom and message.
    Define your soul while sowing seeds, the best foot forward is the one that leads. Lovely lines.

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  3. 07/13/2017 at 2:03 am

    Touching, uplifting, and inspiring, Eugenia. WELL done!
    xx,
    mgh

    Liked by 1 person

  4. 07/13/2017 at 10:55 am

    Thank you so much, Madelyn.:)

    Like

  5. Davy D
    07/13/2017 at 11:00 am

    Powerful words Eugenia. I agree with the previous comments, the line “Define your soul while sewing seeds” is exquisite.

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    • 07/13/2017 at 11:40 am

      Thank you so much. Davy. Your comment means a lot to me.

      Liked by 1 person

      • Davy D
        07/13/2017 at 11:41 am

        It was excellent poetry Eugenia.

        Liked by 1 person

  6. 07/13/2017 at 2:59 pm

    So much emotion captured in so few words x

    Liked by 1 person

  7. 07/13/2017 at 11:06 pm

    Great lines! “Atrocities breed from things absurd” so true, wonderful insight. Thanks for sharing.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. 07/15/2017 at 11:15 am

    Beautiful and so true!

    Like

  9. 07/15/2017 at 12:11 pm

    A short sharp poem with a profound emotional feel.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. 07/16/2017 at 2:35 am

    Beautiful😍

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  11. 07/16/2017 at 9:40 pm

    Scorching hot, the flame of words
    That spark conversations, no useless words.
    A passion released into this place,
    The full depth of meaning,
    Never to be erased.

    Liked by 1 person

    • 07/17/2017 at 11:30 am

      You never cease to amaze me, Donna-Luisa. 😉

      Like

  12. 07/19/2017 at 10:41 am

    Beautiful lines

    Like

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