There’s this wise old raven
Yesteryear was his destination
Wanting to solve life’s equations
Stepped up to the occasion
But his memory was on vacation
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Eugenia
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Categories: Poetry, Writing Challenges
I am like the raven. Not in wisdom or the desire to travel to yesteryear but my mind is often on vacation these days. Your words made me chuckle. Thanks!
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I am glad you enjoyed it, Patricia.
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It’s nicely done….I like the closing line.
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, Robert.
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I fveel vewry much at home with that last line! 🙂
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You’re not alone in your feelings. 😉
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Wonderful poem.. and I confess too, that at times my memory seems to be taking more and more vacations 😉 🤣😁
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Thank you and me too. A vacation or two is okay for our memory as long as it’s not permanent. 😎
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LOL 🙂
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Nice poetry Eugenia. thanks for the smile 🙂
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Thank you, Davy.
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Ha Ha! Yes, what happened to my very own raven? X
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