Life on Hold

There’s this wise old raven

Yesteryear was his destination

Wanting to solve life’s equations

Stepped up to the occasion

But his memory was on vacation

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This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word vacation.  Please drop by and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place

Eugenia

  13 comments for “Life on Hold

  1. 08/02/2017 at 10:22 pm

    I am like the raven. Not in wisdom or the desire to travel to yesteryear but my mind is often on vacation these days. Your words made me chuckle. Thanks!

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  2. 08/03/2017 at 12:52 am

    It’s nicely done….I like the closing line.

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    • 08/03/2017 at 8:09 am

      Thank you so much for your kind comment, Robert.

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  3. 08/03/2017 at 3:53 am

    I fveel vewry much at home with that last line! 🙂

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    • 08/03/2017 at 3:47 pm

      You’re not alone in your feelings. 😉

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  4. 08/03/2017 at 9:05 am

    Wonderful poem.. and I confess too, that at times my memory seems to be taking more and more vacations 😉 🤣😁

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  5. Davy D
    08/03/2017 at 11:16 am

    Nice poetry Eugenia. thanks for the smile 🙂

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  6. 08/04/2017 at 11:58 pm

    Ha Ha! Yes, what happened to my very own raven? X

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