Alienated

08/09/2017 • 11 Comments

Oh to fit in and be like the rest

A bowtie smile and looking your best

You continued to deceive

We no longer believe

You labeled yourself as an unwanted guest

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11 comments for “Alienated”

sakshibhojane04

08/10/2017 at 6:21 am

Brilliantly written🎓

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-Eugenia

08/10/2017 at 8:38 am

Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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Davy D

08/10/2017 at 9:01 am

Intriguing poetry Eugenia. Who really is the odd one out?

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- -Eugenia
  
  08/10/2017 at 4:27 pm
  
  Thank you and I like your response. It is judgemental, perhaps?
  
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  - Davy D
    
    08/11/2017 at 2:07 am
    
    It was not meant to be Eugenia. The point I was trying to make is that sometimes when someone stands out from the crowd, it is the crowd who may appear to be different or alienated, if you know what I mean?
    
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Patricia

08/10/2017 at 7:10 pm

We all know peeps like this and they do make their own labels whether they think so or not. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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- -Eugenia
  
  08/11/2017 at 11:28 am
  
  😃
  
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jacquelineobyikocha

08/11/2017 at 1:41 pm

Well written. Deception does wear out after some time no matter how well dressed it is.

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- -Eugenia
  
  08/11/2017 at 3:31 pm
  
  Thank you.
  
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  08/12/2017 at 4:40 pm
  
  Thank you very much for the pingback. I appreciated it! 😃
  
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