Oh to fit in and be like the rest

A bowtie smile and looking your best

You continued to deceive

We no longer believe

You labeled yourself as an unwanted guest


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11 responses to “Alienated

  1. Brilliantly written🎓


  2. Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.


  3. Intriguing poetry Eugenia. Who really is the odd one out?

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    • Thank you and I like your response. It is judgemental, perhaps?

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      • It was not meant to be Eugenia. The point I was trying to make is that sometimes when someone stands out from the crowd, it is the crowd who may appear to be different or alienated, if you know what I mean?

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  4. We all know peeps like this and they do make their own labels whether they think so or not. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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  5. Well written. Deception does wear out after some time no matter how well dressed it is.

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