Alienated

Posted on 08/09/2017 | 11 Comments
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Oh to fit in and be like the rest

A bowtie smile and looking your best

You continued to deceive

We no longer believe

You labeled yourself as an unwanted guest

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This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word guest.  Please drop by and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place

Eugenia

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11 responses to “Alienated”

  1. sakshibhojane04 | 08/10/2017 at 6:21 am |

    Brilliantly written🎓

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  2. -Eugenia | 08/10/2017 at 8:38 am |

    Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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  3. Davy D | 08/10/2017 at 9:01 am |

    Intriguing poetry Eugenia. Who really is the odd one out?

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    • -Eugenia | 08/10/2017 at 4:27 pm |

      Thank you and I like your response. It is judgemental, perhaps?

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      • Davy D | 08/11/2017 at 2:07 am |

        It was not meant to be Eugenia. The point I was trying to make is that sometimes when someone stands out from the crowd, it is the crowd who may appear to be different or alienated, if you know what I mean?

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  4. Patricia | 08/10/2017 at 7:10 pm |

    We all know peeps like this and they do make their own labels whether they think so or not. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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  5. jacquelineobyikocha | 08/11/2017 at 1:41 pm |

    Well written. Deception does wear out after some time no matter how well dressed it is.

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