The testimonies of yesteryear
Lessons that transcribe desire
Let’s not be too hasty to conspire
Spilled ink will reveal the liars
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This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word desire. Please stop in and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place
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Eugenia
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Categories: Poetry, Writing Challenges
The hasty always give themselves away!
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Yes, they do and it usually catches up with them. 🙂
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Intriguing piece of poetry Eugenia. I wonder how many writers of this type could look the subjects of the writing in the eye. Your photo brings more power to the poem.
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Thank you, Davy, for your very nice comment. It pleases me when my readers take notice that the intent of the image is to compliment the written piece.
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Eugenia,
Fabulous poem! I love the rhyme of your ending words in each line – desire, conspire, liars. This is something I wish came natural to me. Ooo, what interesting poem! I wonder what lies were revealed? Thanks for sharing!
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I’m glad you enjoyed it, Cathy!
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Don’t know how I missed your link but I am glad I found it! Great poem and love the cat’s eyes. Thanks for sharing.
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I’m glad you liked it, Patricia. I find cat’s eyes beautiful and fascinating. They have a way of communicating that doesn’t need to be verbalized.
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