Poetry

Ideas in Locomotion

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146037-The-Universe

It takes our selfless devotion

 and daunting of foolish notions

More strongly the act of remotion

  can mute chaotic commotion

   To gladden harmonious motion

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In Other Words

This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word devotion. Please stop in and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place

And please pay a visit to my other blog dedicated to poetry – ThusNSuch

Eugenia

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  2. Nice take and poetry on the prompt Eugenia. It took a few reads to get the penny to drop, but once I had fathomed remotion it all made perfect sense.

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