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Ideas in Locomotion

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It takes our selfless devotion

 and daunting of foolish notions

More strongly the act of remotion

  can mute chaotic commotion

   To gladden harmonious motion

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In Other Words

This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word devotion. Please stop in and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place

 

I’d be delighted to see you at the Go Dog Go Cafe where there is a remarkable cluster of talented writers. I’m one of the Baristas and proud to be a part this elite group.

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  13 comments for “Ideas in Locomotion”

  1. charliezero1.wordpress.com
    02/28/2018 at 5:00 pm

    This poetic rhythm is perfect!

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  2. Davy D
    03/01/2018 at 10:18 am

    Nice take and poetry on the prompt Eugenia. It took a few reads to get the penny to drop, but once I had fathomed remotion it all made perfect sense.

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  3. Lynz Real Cooking
    03/01/2018 at 11:13 am

    Love the rhythm of this poem and always meaningful!

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  4. Cathy Kennedy
    03/01/2018 at 2:58 pm

    Eugenia,

    To gladden harmonious motion…yes, that’s where I want to be. 🙂 Gr8 poem!

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  5. Patricia
    03/01/2018 at 9:34 pm

    Wonderful poem. Selfless devotion, a hard thing to find…harder yet to achieve.
    Thanks for sharing with In Other Words.

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  6. Patty Thurlby
    03/02/2018 at 1:22 am

    very clever use of words!

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