Ideas in Locomotion

02/28/2018 • 13 Comments

It takes our selfless devotion

and daunting of foolish notions

More strongly the act of remotion

can mute chaotic commotion

To gladden harmonious motion

This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word devotion. Please stop in and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place

And please pay a visit to my other blog dedicated to poetry – ThusNSuch

Eugenia

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13 comments for “Ideas in Locomotion”

charliezero1.wordpress.com

02/28/2018 at 5:00 pm

This poetic rhythm is perfect!

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- -Eugenia
  
  02/28/2018 at 5:05 pm
  
  Thank you so much, Charlie! 🙂
  
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  - charliezero1.wordpress.com
    
    02/28/2018 at 5:10 pm
    
    You’re very welcome, Eugenia. 🙂
    
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Davy D

03/01/2018 at 10:18 am

Nice take and poetry on the prompt Eugenia. It took a few reads to get the penny to drop, but once I had fathomed remotion it all made perfect sense.

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- -Eugenia
  
  03/01/2018 at 11:55 am
  
  😉I am glad you liked it, Davy.
  
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Lynz Real Cooking

03/01/2018 at 11:13 am

Love the rhythm of this poem and always meaningful!

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- -Eugenia
  
  03/01/2018 at 11:55 am
  
  Thank you! xo
  
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Cathy Kennedy

03/01/2018 at 2:58 pm

Eugenia,

To gladden harmonious motion…yes, that’s where I want to be. 🙂 Gr8 poem!

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  03/01/2018 at 4:44 pm
  
  Me too, Cathy! Thank you. 😃
  
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Patricia

03/01/2018 at 9:34 pm

Wonderful poem. Selfless devotion, a hard thing to find…harder yet to achieve.
Thanks for sharing with In Other Words.

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  03/01/2018 at 9:41 pm
  
  Thank you! 😀
  
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Patty Thurlby

03/02/2018 at 1:22 am

very clever use of words!

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  03/02/2018 at 10:38 am
  
  Thank you, Patty!
  
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