It takes our selfless devotion
and daunting of foolish notions
More strongly the act of remotion
can mute chaotic commotion
To gladden harmonious motion
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This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word devotion. Please stop in and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place
Eugenia
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Categories: Challenges, Poetry
Onward 
Up up and away 
Breathless 
It’s Christmas 
This poetic rhythm is perfect!
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Thank you so much, Charlie! 🙂
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You’re very welcome, Eugenia. 🙂
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Nice take and poetry on the prompt Eugenia. It took a few reads to get the penny to drop, but once I had fathomed remotion it all made perfect sense.
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😉I am glad you liked it, Davy.
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Love the rhythm of this poem and always meaningful!
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Thank you! xo
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Eugenia,
To gladden harmonious motion…yes, that’s where I want to be. 🙂 Gr8 poem!
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Me too, Cathy! Thank you. 😃
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Wonderful poem. Selfless devotion, a hard thing to find…harder yet to achieve.
Thanks for sharing with In Other Words.
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Thank you! 😀
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very clever use of words!
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Thank you, Patty!
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