Ideas in Locomotion


It takes our selfless devotion

 and daunting of foolish notions

More strongly the act of remotion

  can mute chaotic commotion

   To gladden harmonious motion



In Other Words


This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word devotion. Please stop in and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place



I’d be delighted to see you at the Go Dog Go Cafe where there is a remarkable cluster of talented writers. I’m one of the Baristas and proud to be a part this elite group.





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  13 comments for “Ideas in Locomotion

  1. 02/28/2018 at 5:00 pm

    This poetic rhythm is perfect!

  2. 03/01/2018 at 10:18 am

    Nice take and poetry on the prompt Eugenia. It took a few reads to get the penny to drop, but once I had fathomed remotion it all made perfect sense.

    • 03/01/2018 at 11:55 am

      😉I am glad you liked it, Davy.

  3. 03/01/2018 at 11:13 am

    Love the rhythm of this poem and always meaningful!

  4. 03/01/2018 at 2:58 pm


    To gladden harmonious motion…yes, that’s where I want to be. 🙂 Gr8 poem!

    • 03/01/2018 at 4:44 pm

      Me too, Cathy! Thank you. 😃

  5. 03/01/2018 at 9:34 pm

    Wonderful poem. Selfless devotion, a hard thing to find…harder yet to achieve.
    Thanks for sharing with In Other Words.

    • 03/01/2018 at 9:41 pm

      Thank you! 😀

  6. 03/02/2018 at 1:22 am

    very clever use of words!

    • 03/02/2018 at 10:38 am

      Thank you, Patty!

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