Ideas in Locomotion

It takes our selfless devotion

 and daunting of foolish notions

More strongly the act of remotion

  can mute chaotic commotion

   To gladden harmonious motion


This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word devotion. Please stop in and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place


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13 replies

  1. This poetic rhythm is perfect!

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  2. Nice take and poetry on the prompt Eugenia. It took a few reads to get the penny to drop, but once I had fathomed remotion it all made perfect sense.

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  3. Love the rhythm of this poem and always meaningful!

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  4. Eugenia,

    To gladden harmonious motion…yes, that’s where I want to be. 🙂 Gr8 poem!

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  5. Wonderful poem. Selfless devotion, a hard thing to find…harder yet to achieve.
    Thanks for sharing with In Other Words.

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  6. very clever use of words!

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