Poetry, Writing Challenges

Ideas in Locomotion

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146037-The-Universe

It takes our selfless devotion

 and daunting of foolish notions

More strongly the act of remotion

  can mute chaotic commotion

   To gladden harmonious motion

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In Other Words

This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word devotion. Please stop in and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place

And please pay a visit to my other blog dedicated to poetry – ThusNSuch

Eugenia

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  13 comments for “Ideas in Locomotion”

  1. charliezero1.wordpress.com
    02/28/2018 at 5:00 pm

    This poetic rhythm is perfect!

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  2. Davy D
    03/01/2018 at 10:18 am

    Nice take and poetry on the prompt Eugenia. It took a few reads to get the penny to drop, but once I had fathomed remotion it all made perfect sense.

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  3. Lynz Real Cooking
    03/01/2018 at 11:13 am

    Love the rhythm of this poem and always meaningful!

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  4. Cathy Kennedy
    03/01/2018 at 2:58 pm

    Eugenia,

    To gladden harmonious motion…yes, that’s where I want to be. 🙂 Gr8 poem!

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  5. Patricia
    03/01/2018 at 9:34 pm

    Wonderful poem. Selfless devotion, a hard thing to find…harder yet to achieve.
    Thanks for sharing with In Other Words.

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  6. Patty Thurlby
    03/02/2018 at 1:22 am

    very clever use of words!

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