Eugi's Causerie

And so it goes…

146037-The-Universe

It takes our selfless devotion

 and daunting of foolish notions

More strongly the act of remotion

  can mute chaotic commotion

   To gladden harmonious motion

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In Other Words

This week the event is to Write a story or poem of 5 Lines or Less using the word devotion. Please stop in and join the challenge at Patricia’s Place

And please pay a visit to my other blog dedicated to poetry – ThusNSuch

Eugenia

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13 thoughts on “Ideas in Locomotion

  1. This poetic rhythm is perfect!

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    1. -Eugenia says:

      Thank you so much, Charlie! 🙂

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      1. You’re very welcome, Eugenia. 🙂

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  2. Davy D says:

    Nice take and poetry on the prompt Eugenia. It took a few reads to get the penny to drop, but once I had fathomed remotion it all made perfect sense.

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    1. -Eugenia says:

      😉I am glad you liked it, Davy.

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  3. Love the rhythm of this poem and always meaningful!

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  4. Eugenia,

    To gladden harmonious motion…yes, that’s where I want to be. 🙂 Gr8 poem!

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    1. -Eugenia says:

      Me too, Cathy! Thank you. 😃

      Like

  5. Patricia says:

    Wonderful poem. Selfless devotion, a hard thing to find…harder yet to achieve.
    Thanks for sharing with In Other Words.

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    1. -Eugenia says:

      Thank you! 😀

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  6. very clever use of words!

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    1. -Eugenia says:

      Thank you, Patty!

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