8 comments for “When

  1. 08/30/2018 at 10:42 pm

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena.

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  2. 08/30/2018 at 10:57 pm

    I like how you neatly ‘bypassed’ the future. I see an aspect of a ‘distilled essence’ of time being repeated. Repetitions gives a sense of timelessness, as we know time.

    Correct me, if I am wrong. I am learning…

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    • 08/31/2018 at 10:06 am

      Thank you, Reena! I struggled with this one because I found myself going in too many directions. I was trying to capture a sense of timelessness because one never knows how long “now” and “then” will continue. You are correct in your observation.

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  3. 08/31/2018 at 8:15 am

    That’s a very interesting write — I like how you played with the idea of time here.
    -HA

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