Poetry

Fragmented Soul

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splintered dreams

images faded and torn

with emotions worsening

with time

Greatness questioned

as original intent swathed

by gossipy stares create

feelings of dismay

Enter doubts of one’s

self-esteem causing

victim like symptoms

with no foreseeable end

to this long and

shadowed

catastrophe

pieces of la-la land

forever falling

§

broken (1)

Reena’s Exploration Challenge – Week 56

My other blog ThusNSuch

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-Eugenia

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  2. I like how you describe a complex process in few words — especially ‘greatness questioned – as original intent swathed by’. It moves beyond the poetic.

    Thank you so much for sharing!

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    Reply
  13. Pingback: Reena’s Exploration Challenge #Week 57 – Reena Saxena

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