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Fragmented Soul

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splintered dreams

images faded and torn

with emotions worsening

with time

Greatness questioned

as original intent swathed

by gossipy stares create

feelings of dismay

Enter doubts of one’s

self-esteem causing

victim like symptoms

with no foreseeable end

to this long and

shadowed

catastrophe

pieces of la-la land

forever falling

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broken (1)

Reena’s Exploration Challenge – Week 56

-Eugenia

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29 replies

  1. 15andmeowing
    09/27/2018 • 9:27 pm

    Well done and I like the photo with the falling leaves.

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  2. Reena Saxena
    09/27/2018 • 9:59 pm

    I like how you describe a complex process in few words — especially ‘greatness questioned – as original intent swathed by’. It moves beyond the poetic.

    Thank you so much for sharing!

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  3. Reena Saxena
    09/27/2018 • 10:00 pm

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:

    The first in this week….

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  4. Michael
    09/27/2018 • 10:50 pm

    I think you expressed your response to this prompt very well Eugenia. There is very much that feeling of life falling around you.

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  7. pinkpeeli
    09/28/2018 • 3:46 am

    This was absolutely awesome!! And the fragrance of the soul was felt here❤❤❤❤❤

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  9. mariel
    09/28/2018 • 3:13 pm

    Great, great, great!

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  10. kaylaannauthor
    09/28/2018 • 8:08 pm

    Wow this is devastatingly beautiful

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  11. Bette A. Stevens
    09/28/2018 • 9:11 pm

    Well done! Sharing… xo

    Liked by 1 person

  13. purehaiku
    10/16/2018 • 7:35 am

    I understand this …

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  14. America On Coffee
    10/21/2018 • 11:40 pm

    Certainly a quiet place with falling leaves can bring a lot of comfort for the weary. I love your creativity! ❤😊☕

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  15. -Eugenia
    10/22/2018 • 10:15 am

    Thank you so much! 😉

    Like

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