Fragmented Soul

Posted on 09/27/2018 | 29 Comments
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splintered dreams

images faded and torn

with emotions worsening

with time

Greatness questioned

as original intent swathed

by gossipy stares create

feelings of dismay

Enter doubts of one’s

self-esteem causing

victim like symptoms

with no foreseeable end

to this long and

shadowed

catastrophe

pieces of la-la land

forever falling

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Reena’s Exploration Challenge – Week 56

-Eugenia

featured image – lovethispic.com

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29 responses to “Fragmented Soul”

  1. 15andmeowing | 09/27/2018 at 9:27 pm |

    Well done and I like the photo with the falling leaves.

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  2. Reena Saxena | 09/27/2018 at 9:59 pm |

    I like how you describe a complex process in few words — especially ‘greatness questioned – as original intent swathed by’. It moves beyond the poetic.

    Thank you so much for sharing!

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  3. Reena Saxena | 09/27/2018 at 10:00 pm |

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:

    The first in this week….

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  4. Michael | 09/27/2018 at 10:50 pm |

    I think you expressed your response to this prompt very well Eugenia. There is very much that feeling of life falling around you.

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  5. saynotoclowns | 09/28/2018 at 12:41 am |

    So well crafted!

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  7. pinkpeeli | 09/28/2018 at 3:46 am |

    This was absolutely awesome!! And the fragrance of the soul was felt here❤❤❤❤❤

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  9. mariel | 09/28/2018 at 3:13 pm |

    Great, great, great!

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  10. kaylaannauthor | 09/28/2018 at 8:08 pm |

    Wow this is devastatingly beautiful

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  11. Bette A. Stevens | 09/28/2018 at 9:11 pm |

    Well done! Sharing… xo

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  14. purehaiku | 10/16/2018 at 7:35 am |

    I understand this …

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  15. America On Coffee | 10/21/2018 at 11:40 pm |

    Certainly a quiet place with falling leaves can bring a lot of comfort for the weary. I love your creativity! ❤😊☕

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  16. -Eugenia | 10/22/2018 at 10:15 am |

    Thank you so much! 😉

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