Fragmented Soul

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splintered dreams

images faded and torn

with emotions worsening

with time

Greatness questioned

as original intent swathed

by gossipy stares create

feelings of dismay

Enter doubts of one’s

self-esteem causing

victim like symptoms

with no foreseeable end

to this long and

shadowed

catastrophe

pieces of la-la land

forever falling

§

broken (1)

Reena’s Exploration Challenge – Week 56

-Eugenia

featured image – lovethispic.com



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29 replies

  1. Well done and I like the photo with the falling leaves.

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  2. I like how you describe a complex process in few words — especially ‘greatness questioned – as original intent swathed by’. It moves beyond the poetic.

    Thank you so much for sharing!

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  3. Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:

    The first in this week….

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  4. I think you expressed your response to this prompt very well Eugenia. There is very much that feeling of life falling around you.

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  5. This was absolutely awesome!! And the fragrance of the soul was felt here❤❤❤❤❤

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  6. Great, great, great!

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  7. Wow this is devastatingly beautiful

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  8. Well done! Sharing… xo

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  9. I understand this …

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  10. Certainly a quiet place with falling leaves can bring a lot of comfort for the weary. I love your creativity! ❤😊☕

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  11. Thank you so much! 😉

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