Closure

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actions as a defeatist

oft unproved

makes one more curious

with each passing day

is the worry worth it?

once faithful and true

only to be suddenly

abandoned

a pathetic drama with

only one performer.

yet, never being a

complainer

indeed, taxing one’s

confidence.

yes, regrets enter the

picture but again,

is the worry worth it?

no, and nor is the need

to keep this whole thing

under wraps as our

goodbyes need no encore

but a little applause will do

§

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Reena’s Exploration Challenge – week 58

Pick minimum two keywords – preferably which is not from your post, and weave a story/poem around it. The onus of identifying your keyword is also on you :). It is not necessary that the keywords appear in your post. It is only a theme, a personality, a mind-set that one works with. It will be interesting to see how these interact with each other.

Hats off to those who can take seven keywords, and create something!

Keywords

  1. Whiner
  2. Patience personified
  3. Pessimist
  4. Testing Times
  5. Doer
  6. Jilted Lover
  7. Circumstantial
  8. Devoted

My Words

whiner – complainer

pessimist – defeatist

testing times – taxing

doer – performer

jilted lover – abandoned

circumstantial – unproven

devoted – faithful and true

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Eugenia

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  19 comments for “Closure

  1. 10/11/2018 at 5:57 pm

    Encore, encore, 👏🏼👏🏼 That was awesome! Bravo! Lol ☺️

    Liked by 1 person

  2. 10/11/2018 at 8:34 pm

    great Eugenia – sometimes we are in the drama of life as sole entertainer

    Liked by 1 person

  3. 10/11/2018 at 10:32 pm

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:

    A story in verse, by Eugenia!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. 10/11/2018 at 10:35 pm

    I like the layers in it. You mention a solo performer, but a close reading reveals more characters in the picture. What the solo performer actually does is respond to the drama around.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. 10/12/2018 at 1:41 am

    I absolutely adore the tone in those last two lines.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. 10/15/2018 at 7:32 am

    Eugenia,

    I love your closing lines…”Goodbyes need no encore but a little applause will do”. Furtastic job with the challenge! 👏

    Liked by 1 person

  7. 10/15/2018 at 7:30 pm

    Reblogged this on Writing and Reflections and commented:

    Come read this incredible poem by Eugenia!

    Liked by 1 person

  8. 10/16/2018 at 1:21 am

    Awesome.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. 10/16/2018 at 1:59 pm

    ‘Only one performer’ says it all. Good stuff. Love it.

    Liked by 1 person

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