Altogether

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Life can be a cloudless dream

loaded with bliss and energy

or filled with ills and pity

Demise can be an overcast dream

ceaseless yet unforgiving

past experiences of being

In between can be a wistful dream

to do what is and right and just

putting all in order, we should

yet, who’s to state this isn’t so

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Reena’s Exploration Challenge – week 71

My other blog ThusNSuch

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Eugenia

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  30 comments for “Altogether

  1. 01/24/2019 at 5:06 pm

    I’m on the happy side of life.

    Have a fabulous day, Eugenia. ♥

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  2. 01/24/2019 at 8:34 pm

    Perfect! Who’s to say it isn’t so?

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  3. 01/24/2019 at 8:35 pm

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:

    Altogether — by Eugenia

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  4. 01/24/2019 at 9:26 pm

    I love it Eugenia. Great response to the prompt

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  5. Michael Todd
    01/24/2019 at 10:07 pm

    This poem is going to make a lot of people happy.

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  6. 01/25/2019 at 12:11 am

    Great poem.

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  7. 01/25/2019 at 1:12 am

    Wise words Eugenia.

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  8. 01/25/2019 at 1:26 pm

    It can be a wistful dream Eugenia, but we keep dreaming, and when we pull our dreams together ALL is possible… ‘isn’t that so?’ 🙂 loved this.. ❤

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    • 01/25/2019 at 7:59 pm

      Thank you, Sue. I wish we could pull of our honorable dreams together and omit the bad ones.

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      • 01/26/2019 at 10:29 am

        I think there are many whom we don’t realise have the same dreams as ourselves Eugenia, It may be surprising how Unity can change the bad for the good dreams if enough join together.. 🙂 Hugs

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  9. 01/27/2019 at 9:10 am

    great poem:)

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  10. 01/28/2019 at 8:50 pm

    In between is as it should be.

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  11. 01/29/2019 at 11:51 am

    Beautifully written, Eugenia. 🙂

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  12. 01/29/2019 at 11:54 am

    Great poem, great take.

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  13. 02/12/2019 at 4:15 pm

    This is an excellent piece. I really love it; it says so much about the duality of life and living it fully. I am listing my blog here, and I would love for others to do so too as I don’t know how to find them unless they visit my site and then I add them to my following list. The most recent post is one where I have tried embedding a song for the first time, and lo and behold, it worked. I would like anyone to visit it and listen to the song; one of my current faves. I am Anne, and my blog is http://www.allinadaysbreath.wordpress.com. This is not commercial at all, but just good thoughts to share.

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