Altogether

Life can be a cloudless dream

loaded with bliss and energy

or filled with ills and pity

Demise can be an overcast dream

ceaseless yet unforgiving

past experiences of being

In between can be a wistful dream

to do what is and right and just

putting all in order, we should

yet, who’s to state this isn’t so

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Reena’s Exploration Challenge – week 71

-Eugenia

30 responses to “Altogether

  1. I’m on the happy side of life.

    Have a fabulous day, Eugenia. ♥

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  2. Perfect! Who’s to say it isn’t so?

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  3. Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:

    Altogether — by Eugenia

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  4. Hélène - Willow Poetry

    I love it Eugenia. Great response to the prompt

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  5. Michael Todd

    This poem is going to make a lot of people happy.

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  6. Great poem.

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  7. Wise words Eugenia.

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  8. It can be a wistful dream Eugenia, but we keep dreaming, and when we pull our dreams together ALL is possible… ‘isn’t that so?’ 🙂 loved this.. ❤

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  9. great poem:)

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  10. In between is as it should be.

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  11. Beautifully written, Eugenia. 🙂

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  12. Great poem, great take.

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  15. This is an excellent piece. I really love it; it says so much about the duality of life and living it fully. I am listing my blog here, and I would love for others to do so too as I don’t know how to find them unless they visit my site and then I add them to my following list. The most recent post is one where I have tried embedding a song for the first time, and lo and behold, it worked. I would like anyone to visit it and listen to the song; one of my current faves. I am Anne, and my blog is http://www.allinadaysbreath.wordpress.com. This is not commercial at all, but just good thoughts to share.

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