28 comments for “Ouch”

  1. usfman
    03/28/2019 at 7:44 pm

    Eugenia: This poem makes me think of the animals who are victims of hunters out west. Thanks for staying in touch.

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    • -Eugenia
      03/28/2019 at 10:09 pm

      And in other parts of the world, as well. Thank you for commenting.

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  2. 15andmeowing
    03/28/2019 at 8:49 pm

    Well done.

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  3. Hélène - Willow Poetry
    03/28/2019 at 9:10 pm

    Beautifully penned Eugenia. I also like your choice of photo.

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    • -Eugenia
      03/28/2019 at 10:12 pm

      Thank you so much, Helene. Seems poor little teddy bear had a rough day!

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      • Hélène - Willow Poetry
        03/28/2019 at 10:32 pm

        Indeed.😥

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  4. Ennle Madresan
    03/28/2019 at 11:04 pm

    Excellent 3 lines!

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  5. Reena Saxena
    03/29/2019 at 12:26 am

    Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:

    Ouch ——–by Eugenia

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  6. Reena Saxena
    03/29/2019 at 12:27 am

    So perfect in its compactness! The image is both cute and heartbreaking.

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  7. delphini510
    03/29/2019 at 4:16 am

    How true is your poem and lovely. The Teddy and the quote are so
    good and confirm the message of scars.

    miriam

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  8. msjadeli
    03/29/2019 at 12:10 pm

    beautiful senryu showing wisdom

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  9. davidbruceblog
    03/29/2019 at 5:22 pm

    Reblogged this on davidbruceblog #2.

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  10. kaylaannauthor
    03/30/2019 at 12:13 pm

    Eugenia, I absolutely love the contrast going between your poem (which reads more serious on its own) and the picture of the adorable teddy bear. Can I ask, what was your inspiration?

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    • -Eugenia
      03/30/2019 at 1:02 pm

      Reena’s prompts are always a good challenge and I find addressing her prompts with writing a haiku (or other forms of poetry) deems the challenge even more interesting for me. I like to make a point in a very few words.

      I don’t think of scars as being ugly but rather a sign of strength and ultimately, survival. The image kept the mood of the poem on the light side, IMO.

      Thank you for your delightful comment. 🙂

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  11. thereluctantpoet
    03/30/2019 at 3:53 pm

    Really a great post, Dear E!! Also, loved your quote. It spoke to me! Thanks for that little seed of inspiration!!!
    xoxoxo

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  12. thereluctantpoet
    03/30/2019 at 8:17 pm

    Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.

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