
the sky, our mentor
thoughts vast and free from sentience
weightlessness obliged
V.J.’S WEEKLY CHALLENGE #67: SKY
Your Daily Word Prompt – Sentience – October 8, 2019
I Write Her Weekly Haiku/Senryu Challenge #40
-Eugenia
featured image – lovethispic.com
Categories: Challenges, Poetry
Love this – especially the “weightlessness obliged”. You capture the sky wonderfully.
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Thank you, V.J. ❤️
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So welcome!
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That was my favorite part too! Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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Nice, Eugenia! 🙂
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Thank you, Susi! 💛
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Great post 👍
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Thank you!
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calm before the storm
which is oft the norm
clear blue skies
slowly covered by whispy cirrus
and then bam
pow
and now
cold cold
things in shorter daze!
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👍😉
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You did capture the sky wonderfully.
Have a fabulous day, Eugenia. ♥
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Thank you, Sandee!
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I love the wonderful sense of freedom this conveys. Beautiful, Eugenia! ❤
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Thank you, Debbie! 🧡
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Such a wonderful description of the sky! Love it! ❤️
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Thank you! 🤗
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Eugenia,
Interesting word. I’m not a wordsmith so I had to look it up. I like how your poem turned out for the picture and the word prompt. Nice job! Incidentally, I’m having issues with Safari and am unable to click the ‘like’ button for some reason. It might have something to do with the update I did last night. Have a good weekend, dearie!
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Thank you, Cathy! Computer gremlins must be bored! I have issues every now and then and sometimes feel it is WordPress. Have a great weekend!
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