memories distanced
cellared with endearing care
looming of a void
V.J.’s Weekly Challenge #79 – subtraction
This week, write the haikai poem of your choice (haiku, senryu, haibun, tanka, haiga, renga, etc.) that alludes to take down pine (decorations) (matsu osame)–taking down decorations.
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-Eugenia
featured image – Pexels
I read recently that post holidays void is a real thing. Like your version, Eugi!
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I believe it is, V.J. There is a lot of hype and work before the holidays and then it’s gone all too soon. I am glad you enjoyed my version.
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I did!
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #3: Eugenia’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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Thank you for sharing, Frank!
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Great use of the prompts Eugenia! 😀
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Thank you so much, Deborah! 😉
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I like the use of the word “cellar” as a verb.
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Thank you! I searched for the right word when writing this and I am glad someone took notice.
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Sounds a bit ominous. Post-holiday blues. Perfect image you chose, Eugenia. ❤
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Thank you! 😉
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