Natural metamorphoses

the courage of change

old man river can attest

lurking of springtime

Frank Tassone’s #Haikai Challenge #127 (2/22/20): waters of spring (haru no mizu)

This week, write the haikai poem of your choice (haiku, senryu, haibun, tanka, haiga, renga, etc.) that alludes to the waters of spring (haru no mizu).

-Eugi

featured image – Pexels

  41 comments for “Natural metamorphoses

  1. 02/23/2020 at 1:27 pm

    Absolutely beautiful.

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  2. 02/23/2020 at 2:23 pm

    Beautiful eugenia! ❀

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  3. 02/23/2020 at 2:25 pm

    Very lovely!

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  4. 02/23/2020 at 3:24 pm

    WOW, this is Nice–your lines and the photo!

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  5. 02/23/2020 at 5:25 pm

    Aaaah lovely!!! Capturing the change happening right in front of us.

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  6. 02/23/2020 at 5:26 pm

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:

    #Haiku Happenings #6: Eugenia’s latest haiku for my current #Haikai Challenge!

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  7. 02/23/2020 at 5:36 pm

    Lovely!!

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  8. 02/23/2020 at 5:40 pm

    Reblogged this on davidbruceblog #2.

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  9. 02/23/2020 at 8:49 pm

    i can’t imagine what would happen if the rivers ever stopped running. Fresh and clean is what spring brings. Nicely done!

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  10. 02/24/2020 at 10:25 am

    Lovely! But now I’ll be humming Old Man River all day πŸ™‚

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    • 02/24/2020 at 11:58 am

      Thank you and I was curious about who would know Old Man River. πŸ˜‰

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      • 02/24/2020 at 12:00 pm

        My problem is that I don’t quite have Paul Robeson’s range. When it gets to the particularly low bass notes, I begin to sound a bit like a frog πŸ™‚

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  11. 02/24/2020 at 11:42 am

    Lovely! I am eagerly awaiting spring!

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  12. 02/24/2020 at 4:45 pm

    This is like the concise and gentle version of The Butcher… ROFL

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  13. 02/24/2020 at 5:12 pm

    Nice imagery. Spring can lurk as much as it wants.

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    • 02/24/2020 at 5:21 pm

      Yes, I wish it would lurk a little harder where I live. It’s cold, grey and rainy.

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  14. 02/24/2020 at 5:26 pm

    love the way your haiku does that little turn in the second line, old giving in to new

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  15. 02/24/2020 at 5:28 pm

    I love this, Eugi! β€œLurking” is a cool word to attach to spring, like it is hiding, just waiting to make its move. Wonderful

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  16. 02/24/2020 at 7:34 pm

    And it is a beauty when it shows itself, isn’t it!! Beautiful!!!

    Pat

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  17. 02/25/2020 at 11:38 pm

    Beautiful.

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  18. 03/08/2020 at 3:52 pm

    Change is the only true constant. May our rivers of hope and caring rise above the banks to comfort humanity πŸ™‚

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Thank you for your comments! πŸ˜‰

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