Broken silence

the air itself paused

sounds of sirens menacing

stories told nervous

VJ’s Weekly Challenge #100: Pause

Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge: Tuesday, June 16, 2020

-Eugenia

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About Eugenia

“Sometimes, the most meaningful messages are shared through the fewest words.” - Julie B. Campbell
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29 Comments

  1. This really captures the aura of the moment. In fact, just moments before opening this, an ambulance drove through our quite neighbourhood – the “air ..,paused”. Well done!

  2. Touching poem Eugenia.

  3. owl on the book marker
    wise
    in three~

  4. Sirens, always worrisome. Toughing words.

  5. ‘Stories told nervous’
    The image is sincere and touching. 👍

  6. Definitely a tense feeling…I hear them too often, as I’m on a state highway.

  7. You hit the hammer on the nail with this purrfect haiku, Eugi. Love the picture too😺Pawkisses for a Happy Day🐾😽💞

  8. Eugenia,

    The air itself paused really grabbed me, almost sending a shiver down my spine. To feel as if the air pauses has to be an intense moment. Excellent job, my friend!

  9. Ahhh so many emotions are coming out…out of this short yet thought provoking piece

  10. Very evocative…❤

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  12. Reminds me of camping trips, hanging around the fire, and telling ghost stories. 🙂

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