Unhurried

moon tides ebb and flow

dreamy thoughts yawn in my mind

my pace heeds caution

VJ’s Weekly Challenge #102: Pace

Your Daily Word Prompt – Caution – June 30, 2020

-Eugenia

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About Eugenia

“Sometimes, the most meaningful messages are shared through the fewest words.” - Julie B. Campbell
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52 Comments

  1. How wonderful!

  2. Love the calmness of your poem.

  3. I like the twist in the final line.

  4. One word comment: BEAUTIFUL!

  5. Good use of the prompts! 🙂

  6. How you convey such peace, tranquility, stillness and quiet in just 15 words is absolutely beyond me. Thank you.

  7. Now here’s a pace that leaves room for breathing and being.

  8. Riffing Eugenia’s “Unhurried”

    Weighted portions, coming and going in stride;
    epiphanies emerge, in their own time and space.
    Depictions appear, to surge, then run and hide;
    parody, parity append, as if they own the place.

    Michael Todd (2020)

    • and the entitled
      mingled worlds lacking passion
      history has no guilt

      Thank you for your splendid riff, Michael! 😘

  9. On the prompt about caution:

    I ran towards the slippery when wet floor
    I expected to fly without wings
    and swim on the floor.
    @feddiesharkhy

    • my instinctive self
      shuns what leaves a bitter taste
      my pace heeds caution

      Thank you for your fascinating input! 😊

  10. On the prompt about caution:

    I ran towards the slippery when wet floor
    I expected to fly without wings
    and swim on the floor.
    @feddiesharkhy

    • my instinctive self
      shuns what leaves a bitter taste
      my pace heeds caution

      Thank you for your fascinating input! 😊

  11. On the prompt about caution:

    I ran towards the slippery when wet floor
    I expected to fly without wings
    and swim on the floor.
    @feddiesharkhy

    • my instinctive self
      shuns what leaves a bitter taste
      my pace heeds caution

      Thank you for your fascinating input! 😊

  12. WOW-good, especially “thoughts yawn”, as well as “pace heeds”. Really good, Eugenia.

  13. WOW-good, especially “thoughts yawn”, as well as “pace heeds”. Really good, Eugenia.

  14. WOW-good, especially “thoughts yawn”, as well as “pace heeds”. Really good, Eugenia.

  15. Any time I need some peace in my life, I find I just need to read your work

  16. Any time I need some peace in my life, I find I just need to read your work

  17. Any time I need some peace in my life, I find I just need to read your work

  18. the power of the moon

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