28 comments for “Unhurried

  1. 06/30/2020 at 3:42 pm

    How wonderful!

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  2. 06/30/2020 at 4:14 pm

    Love the calmness of your poem.

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  3. 06/30/2020 at 4:45 pm

    I like the twist in the final line.

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    • 06/30/2020 at 6:09 pm

      Thank you, Steven.

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  4. 06/30/2020 at 4:50 pm

    One word comment: BEAUTIFUL!

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    • 06/30/2020 at 6:50 pm

      Thank you so much, Joseph! 😊

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  5. 06/30/2020 at 4:50 pm

    Good use of the prompts! 🙂

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  6. 06/30/2020 at 4:53 pm

    How you convey such peace, tranquility, stillness and quiet in just 15 words is absolutely beyond me. Thank you.

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    • 06/30/2020 at 7:07 pm

      Thank you for your very kind comment, Joseph!

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  7. 06/30/2020 at 5:42 pm

    Now here’s a pace that leaves room for breathing and being.

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  8. Michael Todd
    06/30/2020 at 10:35 pm

    Riffing Eugenia’s “Unhurried”

    Weighted portions, coming and going in stride;
    epiphanies emerge, in their own time and space.
    Depictions appear, to surge, then run and hide;
    parody, parity append, as if they own the place.

    Michael Todd (2020)

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    • 07/01/2020 at 9:17 am

      and the entitled
      mingled worlds lacking passion
      history has no guilt

      Thank you for your splendid riff, Michael! 😘

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  9. 07/01/2020 at 1:41 am

    On the prompt about caution:

    I ran towards the slippery when wet floor
    I expected to fly without wings
    and swim on the floor.
    @feddiesharkhy

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    • 07/01/2020 at 9:34 am

      my instinctive self
      shuns what leaves a bitter taste
      my pace heeds caution

      Thank you for your fascinating input! 😊

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  10. Rhen Laird
    07/01/2020 at 3:12 am

    WOW-good, especially “thoughts yawn”, as well as “pace heeds”. Really good, Eugenia.

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    • 07/01/2020 at 10:53 am

      Thank you, Rhen! 😊

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      • Rhen Laird
        07/01/2020 at 6:47 pm

        You’re most welcome 🙂

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  11. 07/01/2020 at 12:17 pm

    Any time I need some peace in my life, I find I just need to read your work

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    • 07/01/2020 at 12:21 pm

      What a lovely comment. Thank you KaylaAnn! ❤️

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  12. A.
    07/01/2020 at 1:30 pm

    the power of the moon

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    • 07/01/2020 at 1:42 pm

      Yes, and it makes me swoon. 😉

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