Unhurried

moon tides ebb and flow

dreamy thoughts yawn in my mind

my pace heeds caution

VJ’s Weekly Challenge #102: Pace

Your Daily Word Prompt – Caution – June 30, 2020

-Eugenia

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28 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. paeansunplugged
    Jun 30, 2020 @ 15:42:51

    How wonderful!

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  2. Sadje
    Jun 30, 2020 @ 16:14:10

    Love the calmness of your poem.

    Liked by 2 people

  3. Steven Tryon
    Jun 30, 2020 @ 16:45:13

    I like the twist in the final line.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Joseph R. Mason
    Jun 30, 2020 @ 16:50:17

    One word comment: BEAUTIFUL!

    Liked by 2 people

  5. Deborah
    Jun 30, 2020 @ 16:50:18

    Good use of the prompts! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Joseph R. Mason
    Jun 30, 2020 @ 16:53:33

    How you convey such peace, tranquility, stillness and quiet in just 15 words is absolutely beyond me. Thank you.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. V.J. Knutson
    Jun 30, 2020 @ 17:42:11

    Now here’s a pace that leaves room for breathing and being.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Michael Todd
    Jun 30, 2020 @ 22:35:49

    Riffing Eugenia’s “Unhurried”

    Weighted portions, coming and going in stride;
    epiphanies emerge, in their own time and space.
    Depictions appear, to surge, then run and hide;
    parody, parity append, as if they own the place.

    Michael Todd (2020)

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  9. feddiesharkhy
    Jul 01, 2020 @ 01:41:29

    On the prompt about caution:

    I ran towards the slippery when wet floor
    I expected to fly without wings
    and swim on the floor.
    @feddiesharkhy

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  10. Rhen Laird
    Jul 01, 2020 @ 03:12:01

    WOW-good, especially “thoughts yawn”, as well as “pace heeds”. Really good, Eugenia.

    Liked by 1 person

  11. kaylaannauthor
    Jul 01, 2020 @ 12:17:51

    Any time I need some peace in my life, I find I just need to read your work

    Liked by 1 person

  12. A.
    Jul 01, 2020 @ 13:30:47

    the power of the moon

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