Archive Sunday – Take Caution

beware inimical untruths tastily sweet

cameo dramas that result in a dead heat

stories with meaning that take a back seat

wisdom the judgment for a dutch treat

the bargain of balance doesn’t miss a beat

beware creative energy without a heartbeat

-Eugi

original post – https://amanpan.com/2019/07/04/take-caution/

  26 comments for “Archive Sunday – Take Caution

  1. 04/04/2021 at 9:10 am

    I liked the poem especially the last line.

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  2. 04/04/2021 at 9:33 am

    You’ve hit at the heart of the problem; creating without heart.

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  3. 04/04/2021 at 11:56 am

    Yes, Eugenia! You’ve touched on avoiding the shallow, the detriment of it. Well done!

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    • 04/04/2021 at 12:45 pm

      Thank you so much, Susi!

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  4. catscue
    04/04/2021 at 12:33 pm

    I love that, very well put!

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  5. 04/04/2021 at 7:35 pm

    Love the final line especially–YES.

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  6. Bikshya
    04/05/2021 at 1:46 am

    Love these lines Eugenia. On point🙂

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    • 04/05/2021 at 8:55 am

      Thank you so much!

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  7. 04/06/2021 at 4:59 am

    Hey Eugenia 🙂

    Wishing you a truly beautiful day ahead and some music for you today with The Animals and your fave group Led Zeppelin 🙂

    https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2021/04/06/universal-greetings-37/

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  8. 04/06/2021 at 10:35 am

    A beautiful poem in monorhyme. Loved it.

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    • 04/06/2021 at 12:30 pm

      Thank you, Shayan.

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  9. 04/06/2021 at 4:41 pm

    Eugenia, you are quite good…love it.

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  10. 04/08/2021 at 10:37 am

    This is so true about creating (at least for me): “beware creative energy without a heartbeat”. I love this idea.

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  11. 04/08/2021 at 11:28 am

    beautiful poem

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  12. 04/10/2021 at 11:11 am

    Your line about ‘Dutch Treat’ is very important. Especially for teens and spreading Hepatitis. We do not need to fear everything, but caution is always a good thing to have.

    I wonder though how long it will take before we can safely hug or shake hands…

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    • 04/10/2021 at 1:25 pm

      I agree, Jules, caution is a good thing to have. No clue how long it will take – perhaps, depending on where one lives. Guidelines and rules not consistent and not one size fits all.

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