beware inimical untruths tastily sweet
cameo dramas that result in a dead heat
stories with meaning that take a back seat
wisdom the judgment for a dutch treat
the bargain of balance doesn’t miss a beat
beware creative energy without a heartbeat
-Eugi
original post – https://amanpan.com/2019/07/04/take-caution/
Categories: Poetry, Yesteryears Ink
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I liked the poem especially the last line.
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Thank you!
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You’ve hit at the heart of the problem; creating without heart.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 👍 Happy Easter.
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Yes, Eugenia! You’ve touched on avoiding the shallow, the detriment of it. Well done!
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Thank you so much, Susi!
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I love that, very well put!
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Thank you!
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Love the final line especially–YES.
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Thank you!
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Love these lines Eugenia. On point🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Hey Eugenia 🙂
Wishing you a truly beautiful day ahead and some music for you today with The Animals and your fave group Led Zeppelin 🙂
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A beautiful poem in monorhyme. Loved it.
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Thank you, Shayan.
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Eugenia, you are quite good…love it.
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Thank you so much, Donna-Luisa!💖
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This is so true about creating (at least for me): “beware creative energy without a heartbeat”. I love this idea.
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Thank you and I am glad you enjoyed it.😊
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Welcome 🙂
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beautiful poem
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Thank you!
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welcome
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Your line about ‘Dutch Treat’ is very important. Especially for teens and spreading Hepatitis. We do not need to fear everything, but caution is always a good thing to have.
I wonder though how long it will take before we can safely hug or shake hands…
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I agree, Jules, caution is a good thing to have. No clue how long it will take – perhaps, depending on where one lives. Guidelines and rules not consistent and not one size fits all.
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