mizzly and grey, the
sullen day brought on a smile
beneath the rainbow
#TankaTuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge No. 255: #Tastetherainbow
*mizzly is a new word for me. The credit goes to Derrick Knight’s post – Soggy Sustenance
-Eugi
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“I am learning to love the sound of my feet walking away from things that aren’t meant for me.” unknown
I like rain. But warm rain. Cold rain can turn to ice or s–w. 😉
We’re on the same page, Jules. 😉
I immediately thought of Derrick when I read your poem!!
I commented to Derrick how much I enjoyed the word “mizzled” and I wanted to use it in a poem. 😉
I remember seeing your comment. 🙂
A new word for me too. Lovely poem Eugi
Thank you, Sadje! 😉
I’d say!
Mizzly is a great description for a grey day! At least there was a smile, as well. 🙂
Thank you, Debbie! 😉
“Mizzly” is a portmanteau for “misty” and “drizzly,” isn’t it?
Probably/ It is primarily used in the UK. Definition – mizzle
1. noun A fine rain that is less intense than drizzle but slightly more intense than mist. Primarily heard in UK.
I enjoyed this poem, Euji! I love the sound of falling rain. I also love that it cleanses the earth. So, the smile that comes in your poem reminds me of always finding joy even when surrounded by dreariness. 🙂
Thank you so much, Yvette!
I love how you turned the frown of the day upside down. We get lots of mizzle here in Cornwall, lols 💕🙂
Thank you, Harmony! 😉
gray ~ day ~ rainbow
that really flows, Eugi!
<3
David
Thank you, David!
We always can find a rainbow close by, it’s up to us to find the colours.
Yes, we can, Elizabeth! We just have to look for it.
“Mizzly” is an excellent portmanteau for mist and drizzle! This is a wonderful poetic device! I like the creativity of this haiku. It really speaks to me. <3
Thank you so much, Colleen! I am so glad your liked it! 💖
Loved this! ☔️
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I love your use of a new word. Thanks for introducing. 🙂
Thank you and you’re welcome!
Beautiful and reflective.
Thank you, Jude!
Perfect description!
Thank you, Susi!
You’re welcome, Eugenia!
Rainbows are the saving grace of “missley” days. Lovely haiku, Eugi! <3
Thank you, Cheryl! 💖